czwartek, 20 stycznia 2011

Hello guys ^^ At first I want to thank all of you for reading my blog, you're so nice! And it means a lot to me. I would be really grateful if you could comment under my posts and say what do you think about my stories ;-; It would be really awesome :3 I want to know your opinions! And I'm sorry, I'm not good writer, and writing in English is REALLY REALLY hard for me. You have to forgive me some grammar mistakes and typos ;-;

On the right you can see amazing drawing of Bianca done by talented Tsunade-91 check out her dA!

Okay. so you knew how both girls grew in a Temple of Sun, and you know ritual of becoming priestess looks like. Bianca spent whole year living in a Temple as full-time priestess, but she had no chances to see her little sister. Sometimes when she was outside she saw Ellen playing in Temple's garden, but she was not allowed to talk with her. After very long year of loneliness one of priestesses went into Ellen's room and said to her that she have to go to Bianca's room. Bianca was very nervous, she didn't know what to say to Ellen after year of separation. Main cause of her nervousness was her promise, she promised that she will never leave her sis. She didn't know that high Priestess will forbid their meeting. When little white haired girl stepped into her room Bianca was shocked. This Ellen wasn't her little sis that she remembered. She was 8 years old, but she looked much older. She wasn't smiling like in the past, and she was kinda downcast.
-Ell? Are you sick? What happened?
-You promised me... You said that you won't leave me. And i didn't see you for a whole year? You know hard hard was that time for me? 
-I know Ell... you have no clue how bad i feel about this, high priestess said that i can't talk with you. 
-I thought that you just don't want see me no more, because i was a bad girl- Ellen started to cry.
-Bad girl? Sweetie, you have never been bad girl. You're my beloved sister and i will always love you. And if i had chance to choose i would live with you in that little room behind kitchen.
-I'm happy that I see you sis, I missed you so much! 
From that moment Bianca was able to see Ellen from time to time, and bond between girls became stronger. Ellen started growing and becoming teenager. She was as lively as then when she was little child, she was very mutinous, and she didn't like her duties in the Temple. She was typical teenager, she didn't want to execute ANY duties. When she had chance she always tried to go out of the Temple and go for a walk through the Varos town. When she turned 14 years old Bianca was already 21 years old, and she was one of most important Priestess of Sun. Ellen started her education, and she was learning all things from her sister. Bianca was teaching her because she was only person that Ellen listened. Of course whole process of becoming priestess was the same as Bianca's-> two years of education, first dot tattooed at first year, second in second year and third dot during ceremonial of ordaining priestess.  Both girls were living in the Temple very peacefully, they spent all days on preying, reading holy books, re-writing damaged books, helping at in the garden etc. When Bianca was 27 years old, Highest Priestess got really sick, everybody knew that old lady don't have much time. Before she died she had to do one thing, she had to choose her successor. All priestesses are praying to the God of Sun, but only highest Priestess knew real name of God. And she could call him by saying this name, that was the way people kept in touch with Gods. Old lady chose Bianca for her place. Before she died she was talking with her whole night, and she made fourth dots on Bianca's body. It was made by ink (in powder) mixed with very special water, different from Holy water in the Temple. High Priestess have special bottle of that water in her room, of course hidden. This bottle is the same for ages, and First Sun Priestess got it from God of Sun, specially for making tattoos. For one tattoo are needed only 2-3 drops of that water, so there was still a lots of that fluid inside glass bottle. (I'm sorry if I wrote that too complicated, if you don't understand something please ask me in comment, or on dA, I'll answer with pleasure). After old lady's death Bianca became High Priestess and she was managing all girls in Temple.

Here I will skip 10 years. When Bianca was 37 years old Ellen was 30. I have to say here that both girls were half Aerie (their mother Miranda was born in Aerie's village), and Aerie people are long-living humans. They live up to 150-170 years.
Some people asked me about Bianca's death. Yes, Bianca dies in age of 37 years old. One day somebody stole bottle with Holy Water from Bianca's room. Ellen decided that she'll find out who stole it and recover that bottle. She went into the building where was big feast there. She was looking for that bottle in every single room, it was very hard because there was many soldiers, some of them were drunk. Ellen found bottle in one of merchants sack- probably thief sold him this. Nobody saw her when she was leaving. But Ellen didn't know that Bianca followed her to that  building (honestly i don't know how to call it in english). Bianca was looking for Ellen, she was afraid that something might be wrong, and she might be injured or something. Suddenly one of the soldiers attacked her. She had cape and hood, so he didn't see that she's woman, and he stabbed her with knife. When she fell on the ground he saw that she's woman, and priestess. Poor soldier thought it was a thief and when he realized that he killed Highest Priestess he almost fainted from nervousness. Bianca had no chances, he stabbed her right into her heart. She died in few minutes. When that soldier calmed down he brought Bianca to the Temple and left her at one of rooms on the pillows. He wrote a letter with explanation that he didn't want to do this, and it was accident. Then behind the Temple he committed suicide. Ellen found her sister next day morning when she went to that room to find her corset.
Ellen changed after Bianca's death. She left Temple after Bianca's funeral, only from time to time she was going there to help other Priestesses, she was still priestess, but she didn't live in Temple anymore. She bought old Miranda's tavern, and she started to live in room above tavern. She made small altar in her room and she was praying every day in front of it. I will write someday about her life after that, she had a husband and two kids, but it's theme for another post :3

Sorry for my all mistakes, my English is so horrible :C And I would be very grateful if you could leave here a comment saying what do you think about girls ^^ And I'm sorry for being this so chaotic :<

Best wishes :3

1 komentarz:

  1. I love this story!!! It's really wonderful, If you ever decide to continue pleas send me a not in deviantart :) my username is adwantic

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